Tessie and Kloey
Acrylic on canvas. 16" x 20".
(sold)
It's been a while since I've produced a painting... life got in the way again this past year, and then I had "painter's block" on top of that.I recently agreed to do a painting of two small poodles, working from a photo taken with a cell phone several years back. (Here I will whine a little: cell phone shot = less than stellar focus and color balance). Tessie is the chocolate poodle with a more reserved personality; Kloey is the more outgoing apricot poodle.
I began as usual by trying to recreate the photo and pretty quickly abandoned that idea as many of the elements were not reading well as a composition. It's odd how elements can look reasonable in a photo, but look very strange in a painting.
Working with the strong tile grout lines dominating the image was more challenging than I expected as they continuously lead the eye away from the subject and off the edge of the picture. Trying to set them in correctly using a ruler to measure the perspective angles resulted in an odd perspective- it worked much better to just use my eye to determine the placement of the lines.
At one point I had included the kitchen cabinets lining the background, but they added nothing to the picture other than visual clutter. The vertical cabinets also pulled my eye off the top of the picture and away from the subject. After changing the angles and heights numerous times, I gave up and got rid of the cabinets, leaving an expanse of tile floor which became disturbing (look at the image with the solid blue rug covered up- yikes!) Including and re-positioning the blue rug stopped the grout lines from shooting off into infinity.
The tile floor was virtually the same color as the lighter dog. Adding an overlay wash mix of white, raw sienna and cadmium red, and a touch of ultramarine blue over the light tiles to darken them and push them back helped define the lighter dog.
I'm pleased with the textural contrast of the hard floor behind soft throw rugs and soft dogs. I also like the warm/cool tones repeating throughout the painting. Incorporating the blue colors of the rugs into the dogs helped pull the image together although I am still not satisfied with how I handled the dogs fur textures, and need to find a better solution. The dogs look a little stiff to me, and I did not work out how to make them look more fluid. In retrospect, I should have adjusted more areas of their contours to blend in more with the background values of light and dark to avoid the "cut out" effect.
I am the person the painting was done for as a 70th birthday present from my daughter Pam (Ann's neighbor). Ann you are absolutely to hard on yourself because when I turned the picture around, after opening it from the backside, and saw my two little girls I completely lost it. It was like the little chocolate poodle I lost about a year ago was right back with me. I could not love and cherish the picture more and have it hanging right where I can see it at all times from my recliner. You did an amazing job as far as I'm concerned and cannot see one thing wrong with it. When you can make someone feel like what they have lost is again with them I would definitely call that a successful accomplishment. I cannot thank you and my daughter enough for this special gift you have given me! Sandra Hendrix
ReplyDeleteSandra, I am so glad you are happy with the painting!
ReplyDeleteI had Pam come by periodically and give feedback on how the dogs were coming across, as I was struggling with Kloey. In the photo, the lighting on her head flattened out her features and I knew her face had more definition than what I was seeing in the photo. So getting feedback from Pam was very helpful.
Resolving the background was what really had me tearing my hair out- but luckily I have plenty of that to spare. I was pleased to come up with a solution that didn't deviate to far from their environment.
I mention the areas of struggle and technical solutions more for my own reference in hopes that it will be helpful for making decisions on the next painting- the things that didn't work, the things that did work, and why they worked.
If the painting makes you feel good looking at it, then I'd say it was a good success! Thank you for the nice compliments!
A big success!! Don't be surprised if you get more requests from this family...:)
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